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Friday, August 14, 2020
My Rattlesnake report
I was learning about Rattlesnakes. I enjoyed writing about snakes. I hated writing the sentences. Next time don't wake up at 3am.
Hi Cruz. My name is Kayleigh and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairawhiti. Your Rattlesnake report was pretty impressive. I liked how you wrote about how Rattlesnakes find their food. Next time you should make the writing a different colour so it stands out better. From, Kayleigh🌺
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Hi Cruz. My name is Kayleigh and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairawhiti. Your Rattlesnake report was pretty impressive. I liked how you wrote about how Rattlesnakes find their food. Next time you should make the writing a different colour so it stands out better.
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Kayleigh🌺
ok great itves
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